Most of the children these days prefer playing computer games over outdoor games, this has led to people thinking of how it affects their children. Outdoor activities have a wide range of advantages. Unlike indoor computer games, it helps in overall physical and mental development of kids. On the other hand excess computer use is harmful to human eye, due to the ultra violet radiations emission from the desktop. As most people think outdoor activities should be encouraged.
Technology these days are introducing wide range of computer games which are attracting children towards it. These are provided with advanced graphics, which makes it even more interesting and addictable to children. This has reduced children's interest in studies and enthusiasm to go out, play and meet new people. Hence, reducing the mental as well as physical development and socializing skills.
Computer screen constantly emits ultra violet radiations, which is harmful to human eye when used for long period of time. PC Games these days are so interesting that we won't notice hours pass by, as we remain completely engaged in winning and leveling up. Usually children due to over-excitement and laziness would not mind wearing glasses to protect their eyes from radiations. Anyhow, long time exposure of their naked eye would lead to gradual degradation of eye sight and may also lead to stress and anxiety problems.
To reduce these complications with children development, parents should make sure that their children spend at least an hour or two playing outdoor games. If they don't act by your way of thinking then try convincing them in the way they understand. Even parents can take some time off their work and spend some time playing with their children, this might help them look at outdoor games in different perspective and find it interesting.
In my opinion, outdoor games are way better than computer games, because of it's significance in children overall development. Government can introduce a rule to make physical education compulsory in all schools, where number of friends are more and can make it seem very thrilling and lovable to them.
In conclusion, we can say that it is right for people to encourage physical outdoor games compared to indoor computer games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'radiations'' or 'radiation's'?
Suggestion: radiations'; radiation's
...l to human eye, due to the ultra violet radiations emission from the desktop. As most peop...
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Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t radiations emission from the desktop. As most people think outdoor activities sh...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...harmful to human eye when used for long period of time. PC Games these days are so interesting...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ye would lead to gradual degradation of eye sight and may also lead to stress and anxiety...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t an hour or two playing outdoor games. If they dont act by your way of thinking t...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r or two playing outdoor games. If they dont act by your way of thinking then try co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, at least, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18648648649 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6870696523 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2615004854 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292810843978 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918647221471 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814638482566 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162603635645 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774148863897 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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