The first diagram illustrates the present water supply system in Australia and the second diagram shows how it will be in the future.
Overall, in the future water supply system, the storm water and waste water will not be released into the river. Instead it will be reused by the cities.
To begin, in the present water supply system, the pure water from the dam is released into the city. The water is then used by the houses, shops and the factories. Preceding this, the waste water is transferred to the water treatment plant and after purification it is released into the river. The storm water on the other hand, is directly released to the river without treatment.
In the future water supply system, cerrain changes will take place. In this system, along with the waste water, the storm water alps be treated in the water treatment plant. After the treatment process, the purified water will be delivered to the city for reuse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...er will not be released into the river. Instead it will be reused by the cities. To...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'waters'.
Suggestion: waters
...t is released into the river. The storm water on the other hand, is directly released...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79754601227 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22999172894 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453987730061 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1994680801 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264310935869 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13020318484 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100142956003 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207431069375 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708694397876 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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