The diagrams billow show the design for a wind turbine and its location.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and compare where relevant.

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The diagrams billow show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and compare where relevant.

The picture highlights not only a design of a wind turbine but also discribes about the locations of its too.

On the picture we can see there are three large blades which are made with fiberglass of wood and those blades sensors are controled and adjusted by a computer. The three blades always moves round by round and help to produce energy as well. On the other hand, there is a tiny sensor that shows speed as well as direction. Besides, Here is a small generator near the wind sensor and it may produce near about 1.5 megawatts output also. The three blades, wind sensor and generator are on the top of the tower and the big tower was made by steel. The image shows us two different places for the placement for the turbine one of them is located on very top and the another is situated not so high as first one.Another hand we can see a small domestic turbine also which produce probably 100 kilowatts only.

At last if we keep a look on the photo we can find that a wind turbine is fully depends on the air supply for electricity production.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...three blades always moves round by round and help to produce energy as well. On t...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...produce near about 1.5 megawatts output also. The three blades, wind sensor and gene...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...er is situated not so high as first one.Another hand we can see a small domestic turbin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, so, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38775510204 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28393699123 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1327938961 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131193584809 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566789538833 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514154879745 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108851505603 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361100128698 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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