The diagrams bellow shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture deals with the life cycle of an insect which is called honey bee.
We can see the honey bees pass six steps for being mature. At first, female bees lay one or two eggs in every three days and those eggs are looking like oval shape. After nine or ten days the eggs hatch and its divert into nymph, which is an immature form of an insect as well. Besides, on the day of either 16th or 17th its start first moulting. On the other hand, after first moulting they take more 7 days for going in the second moulting. This stage is very important stage for a honey bee because after passing this stage they become young and adult. Probably, on the day of 15th they are being adult as well as they also take more four days for being mature.
Overall, the insect name honey bee takes almost 34 to 36 days not only being adult but also it can get full freedom in its life after passing those days successfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, second, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24571428571 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.80158660234 2.65546596893 68% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9534618457 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871645610645 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456418351794 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549897320189 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098110268574 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551775018708 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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