The diagrams show changes in a student common room.
The two maps illustrate how a student common room changed
Overall, this area has witnessed several transformations, the most notable of which is the addition of benches and new amenities, such as a television and a drinks machine. Moreover, there has been a rearrangement of tables and chairs.
The student common room five years ago had a row of kitchen amenities in the north of the room such as sink, cupboard, two benches, microwave and refrigerator. Now one bench has been replaced by another microwave, and this bench has been turned into a bench for laptops in the south of the room. Meanwhile the other kitchen amenities remains unchanged.
Regarding the southeastern corner, there was a bookself five years ago. Now television occupy the location of bookself, and there are three armchairs surrounding the television. Furthermore, a new drinks machine is built under the refrigerator. In terms of changes in the middle of the room, there were four table with six chairs each five years ago. Now, two tables are combined into a large table with ten chairs, while two other table mostly remained intact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...strate how a student common room changed Overall, this area has witnessed several...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun table seems to be countable, so consider using: 'four tables'.
Suggestion: four tables
...s in the middle of the room, there were four table with six chairs each five years ago. No...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81020783553 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6109484509 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179645554361 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603592896076 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870283068931 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155739691107 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158596582357 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.