the diagrams show how the bee makes honey, and the stages in the production of honey. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pictures show the steps involved in the life-cycle of the bee and the process by which honey is produced.
Overall, it is noticed that there are 6 stages of making honey, from laying eggs in honeycomb to leaving nectar in a hive in order to become a honey. After that, production of honey experience 5 steps, starting with collecting honeycomb and finishing with distributing and selling.
In terms of making honey, the first step is that a queen bee lays eggs in honeycomb, which is prepared beforehand. These eggs develop to become larvas. And until a week later, they get completely developed. The larvas need three more weeks to turn into bees to be able to leave the hive. Following this, the bees are mature enough to be capable of gathering nectar from flower and subsequently stimulating the nectar in hives, which is called honey, that are continuously produced to become commercial products.
If we look at the process of producing honey. First of all, beekeepers remove the honeycomb from the hives. After being extracted the honeycomb by using a machine, honey is then boiled and cleaned. The last step is that the honey is poured into bottles so that they are delivered to bring to customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...produced to become commercial products. If we look at the process of producing hon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83173076923 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61552159568 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0507381453 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241725954316 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873579175585 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682446862502 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161189819472 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368724471883 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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