Do you agree or disagree with the following statement thatClassmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school.
classmates and parents both play a significant role in the life of the child. A number of people think that classmates have more impact on a child as compared to parents, I oppose the statement for which reasons and examples are mentioned in the subsequent paragraph.
To embark, it is undeniable that classmates have an essential influence on a child’s behavior and the success they achieve in school. For example, when a child has problems and queries they always take the help of their friends to understand things, another perfect example is that in sports his friends might help him in practice and encourage them. Despite all these beneficial sides, they could also bring adverse sides to life like drugs, smoking, and numerous other bad habits, and he could influence to use it and later may get addicted.
On the other side of the picture, parents have a great influence on children in school as well as throughout life. Most of the time after school children spend their time with their parents consequently automatically they learn a number of things from their parents. Moreover, parents are more experienced so they can teach well and help their child by motivating and guiding them in a better way. another reason to support my viewpoint, children are emotionally connected with their kids therefore they can understand their problems extremely well and easily. Further, parents know immensely well about the behavior, mood, weak point, strong point, abilities, and interests. so they are the best mentor and tutor as well.
To sum up, teenager are an image of their parents so I believe that parents have more influence than their classmates in the success they achieve in school.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school 73
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school 73
- Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same school Others however believe that girls achieve better results when educated in single sex school Discuss both these views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04946996466 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60194508848 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5686470588 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199146158253 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823563492836 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629109662743 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140553812862 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488373728173 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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