Eating fastfood

Essay topics:

Eating fastfood

The bar chart provides information regarding the extent of eating fastfood in US by a period of 10 years.
It is obvious that there was a downward tendency in this period. However, the number of people who went to fastfood restaurant in 2006 had a slightly increase.
To be specific, the downward trend was shown clearly by the evidence that the number of people who went to fastfood restaurants everyday had a fall, which was about 4% in 2003 and under 3% in 2006, then remained in 2013. However, the figures for individuals ate this kind of food several times a week and once a week jumped to about 20% and 33% in 2006 before reached the bottom in 2013, at nearly 15% and 27% respectively.
In addtion, there was an impressive number of people who just ate fastfood once or twice a month, which peaked at around 33% in 2013. Then, the number of citizens ate this a few times a year maitainted at 15% while it of people who never took this was about 4% in 2006 and 2013.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2021-12-11 dilnoor 81 view
2018-01-11 Hien Chu 61 view

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...went to fastfood restaurant in 2006 had a slightly increase. To be specific, the downward trend wa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...people who went to fastfood restaurants everyday had a fall, which was about 4% in 2003 ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, then, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39779005525 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43293489153 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.616828223 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1555288517 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864300265538 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100870199572 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128070978557 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102988796837 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.