The elderly
Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of people express concern regarding the role of the elderly in the society. However, it is a controversial issue that a constant rise of the senior’s percentage in many nations has negative or positive influences. From my perspective, I strongly believe that there are both bad and good effects in this field.
Firstly, no one can deny the old’s advantages. It is obvious that they are excellent consultans because of their great experiences regarding both work and life. For example, we prefer talking with veterans due to the fact that peope who went through struggles in the past will be more understanding and can provide people with valuable advices.
Moreover, the elderly still make great contributions to the society because of their participants in volunteer work. The old often have numerous leisure, which they spend to take care their grandchildren or take part in social activities. To illustrate, in Ha Noi, I have witness a lot of senior citizens walk around the street and collect the garbage in every early morning. They play an important role in cleaning the city and setting a goof model for the children.
In the other hand, the increase in the number of elderly residents also have negative effects because of the burden about medical care and pension. In addition, the lack of labor also is one of the problems that the government has to tackle.
In conclusion, there are both negative and postive impacts on society due to the rise of the old’s proportation. However, it seem like the disadvantages are far from advantages. Besides, the government need to pay enough attention to take care the old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ms that the government has to tackle. In conclusion, there are both negative and...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...he old's proportation. However, it seem like the disadvantages are far from adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00711743772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8520905999 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1358147964 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123534466004 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406635486526 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816607904843 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702580460791 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596816968622 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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