Work and family
Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of people who express concerns regarding the traditional family values. It is a controversial issue that we should whether or not pay more attention to this field. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the connections between all members of a family play an important role in life.
Firstly, it is obvious that family in the place brings up the children - the new generations and the future of every nation. As a result of family's impact, children will grow up and become a kind person or an asshole. To illustrate, a recent research has shown that most of the robbers had a dark past with violence or poverty. Therefore, the family plays an indispensable role in educating.
Secondly, the family is where people can be healed all the physical and psychological injuries. To illustrate, in my experience, every time I come back home, I always feel happy and relax as if all the problems get outside the door.
On the other hand, in the information age, people are coping with numerous social issues. For example, job competition is too hard so people have to spend much time to improve knowledge and technic skills. Therefore, the qualifying time for the family will be lower.
In conclusion, traditional family values always play an important role in society so the government should give priority to improving job opportunities for the residents.
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- Imprionment 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...is a controversial issue that we should whether or not pay more attention to this field. From ...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...nd person or an asshole. To illustrate, a recent research has shown that most of the robbers had ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94915254237 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88336043196 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5915947429 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197066808786 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773874321896 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632291497774 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108211590428 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399414813195 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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