Estimated Sales of Jeans in Turkey and Their Projected Market Share

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Estimated Sales of Jeans in Turkey and Their Projected Market Share

The bar graph presents a projection of jeans sales for two brands in Turkey next year - the Mango Company and Jack & Jones Company. Proportion of their market share, together with other companies not specifically mentioned, are then shown the second diagram, the pie chart.

Looking first on the bar graph, there is a projection that both companies will steadily increase their sales overtime, even though there will be some fluctuations and stagnations mid to late next year. Generally, Jack and Jones will be forecasted to sell significantly more than Mango Company over the months except in July and August where Mango Company will overreach their rival companies revenue by around 50 to 120 thousand pairs.

Mango Company will start off with as low as 150 thousand pairs of jeans by January and levelling off at approximately 500 thousand pairs in August until November, reaching its peak at around 650 thousand pairs by year-end. Jack and Jones Company on the other hand will start off earning 3 times more of Mango Company's first sales, but will have an expected 50% revenue shortfall after this, before steadily increasing their profit until December when it will hit its peak with around 950 thousand pair of jeans sold to consumers.

Looking at the pie chart, it is foreseen that Jack and Jones Company and Mango Company will be the top 2 brands in Turkey. They are forecasted to share 30% and 20% respectively in the stock market, making up half of the total jeans business in the market.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, then, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48727228857 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9228350449 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192785822819 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106951671941 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740750803176 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154678001485 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958619336855 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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