Ex2: The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs show the development in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time which people spend on doing the housework in one nation from 1920 to 2019.
In general, the percentage of households with electrical appliances grew rapidly, while the number of hours of housework per week, per household experienced a moderate fall. In 1920, there were a few families using refrigerator, and 20 years later, there was an enormous growth of 50% in the percentage of households with refrigerators. Between 1940 and 1980, the figure continued to rise from 50% to 100%, and in 2019 all families use refrigerators. There was a gradual upward trend in the data of vacuum cleaner from 30% to 100% in the 80-year period from 1920 to 2000. 19 years later, the percentage of households that used vacuum cleaners stayed unchanged with 100%. Between 1920 and 1960, the information of washing machine witnessed a substantial increase from 40% to 70%. In the remaining period of time, there was a small fluctuation, but the figure still went up to over 70% in 2019. In 40 year- period between 1920 and 1960, the number of hours per week declined gradually from 50 hours to 20 hours. 59 years later, there was a slight fluctuation between 20 hours and 10 hours, and finally the data decreased to 10 hours in 2019.
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- Ex2 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 797, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rease from 40% to 70%. In the remaining period of time, there was a small fluctuation, but the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, still, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8185840708 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73394400811 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9709453043 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190432610788 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836749474131 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847431849621 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223954573927 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101561072938 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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