The lecture talks about a health condition called asthma. It desribes the factors that lead to this disease and the symptoms of this health problem.
First, the reading and the lecture has a conflict in information.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Vanan
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.35 0.268076937826 131% => OK
Verbs: 0.1 0.116061578633 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0 0.0759168565197 0% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.025 0.0366838410393 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0131127313244 191% => OK
Prepositions: 0.075 0.155750635184 48% => More prepositions wanted.
Participles: 0.025 0.0379272487307 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54390460066 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.0210936926555 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.225 0.0948980150116 237% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025 0.00967000014798 259% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 217.0 1161.00487805 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 36.0 196.9 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02777777778 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.44948974278 3.73763899035 66% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.444444444444 0.337110787985 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333333333333 0.247514529752 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.171178102325 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0555555555556 0.112407865282 49% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.54390460066 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 27.0 106.607317073 25% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.546246751206 137% => OK
Word variations: 46.4068953355 49.3433353143 94% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 8.93414634146 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0094962315 52% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.0554457615 42.9750493124 33% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 135.714022679 53% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 23.0094962315 52% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 45.3333333333 47.7609492067 95% => OK
Elegance: 3.0 2.94281807926 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37698703488 0.418131533498 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14442975575 0.181151798455 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0214601122163 0.0850326197045 25% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.79079166458 0.706616315825 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181359285704 0.157042692854 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263862320209 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1125529517 0.108899403657 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252046951662 0.367819155151 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329851686254 0.316326947829 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931800660281 0.0921553760075 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 2.0 7.1512195122 28% => More topic words wanted.
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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