Given is a map of an unnamed town illustrating the probable sits of two new shopping
centers in the relation to various different zones as well as major transportation links.
As shown in the figure, the town has four main zones. Located at the apes of three
arterial roads is a relatively small central business district. Cars are not permitted in this
area and all major roads terminate at its outer edge. Surrounding the town center is a
much larger residential zone which has within it two smaller industrial zones. Beyond
this, meanwhile, is an even larger rural area. A railway line runs through the entire town
from the northwest to the southeast.
With regard to the planned locations of the two new shopping centers, one is likely to be
situated in the town center and will be accessible by train or by parking on the edge of the
central business district and walking. The other will probably be placed on the outskirts
of the town to the northwest. Access to this shopping center will be by either car or train
as it will be situated between the railway line and the main northwest road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ng the probable sits of two new shopping centers in the relation to various diffe...
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...main zones. Located at the apes of three arterial roads is a relatively small cen...
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...district. Cars are not permitted in this area and all major roads terminate at it...
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...r edge. Surrounding the town center is a much larger residential zone which has w...
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... it two smaller industrial zones. Beyond this, meanwhile, is an even larger rural...
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...ailway line runs through the entire town from the northwest to the southeast. ...
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...ew shopping centers, one is likely to be situated in the town center and will be ...
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...y train or by parking on the edge of the central business district and walking. T...
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...will probably be placed on the outskirts of the town to the northwest. Access to ...
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...ng center will be by either car or train as it will be situated between the railw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641025641 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5639692273 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1156406465 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301237347498 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113023058746 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118165139533 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103560345609 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925749646081 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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