The two pie charts illustrate what percentages of energy consumed in Australian households and greenhouse gases that are emitted by them.
As is self-evident, the most proportion of tow charts related to warming factors. Consume energy resembled egression greenhouse in that both origin from heating.
Having survived this data, we can obviously perceive that the ratio of using energy to heating and water heating has a significant amount to almost 70 percent of energy consumption for that purpose.in contrast, the lowest pattern of consuming proposition was reported with cooling which is 2 percent. Other applications, refrigeration, and lighting are getting near a quarter of the whole energy to use.
However, a greenhouse gas that is emitted by household, have a closeness to the pattern of energy. We can observe that approximately half of the emission gas is related to water heating and heating. Gas that gave out by cooling has lost rat 3 percent. Although the proportion of greenhouse gases caused by lighting, refrigeration and other applications a considerable amount of 50 percent of these gases related to them.
In general, it can be asserted that the purposes of the consumed energy have relative to the amount of greenhouse gas which edited by households.
- task 1 the table below gives information on participation in various leisure activities 56
- z 67
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do u agree or disagree? 61
- Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity for instance in zoos Other people say that there are benefits for animals and humans Discuss both sides of this debate and give your personal view 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30882352941 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05518810485 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5739438519 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231294389017 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914227174258 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479722651531 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13434977877 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343985734939 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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