The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which results from this energy use.
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The primary chart exemplifies the utilization of energy, while the second chart depicts the emission of greenhouse gases from this energy usage by an average Australian household.
Overall, heating is the most significantly used form of energy, whereas the least consumption of energy is observed by cooling. Water heating made the most contribution towards greenhouse gas emission; however, the smallest part of this segment is cooling.
Firstly, the most striking feature of the graph is that slightly above two-fifth of energy is used for heating, whereas the greenhouse gas emission through this is exactly three-tenths which is just a third. Similarly, the greenhouse gas emission because of water heating is 32%, which is slightly above the usage of 30%. However, the least used form of energy is cooling and lighting which accounts for 2% and 3% respectively. The emission of greenhouse gases through this is about double resulting in 3% and 8 %.
Moreover, approximately a quarter of energy is exploited for refrigeration and other appliances and greenhouse gas emission due to this is 42%, which is slightly over a two-fifth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, similarly, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37777777778 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94874461039 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494444444444 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7427273221 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346907664942 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154463652487 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832684440364 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214531413695 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953465485358 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.