The chart below compares the energy used in an Australian family house and the CO2 emissions in the environment caused due to the use of energy. The charts shows that majority of energy consumption and CO2 emissions are due to heating used for various purposes.
In a typical Australian house, 42 percent of energy is used for heating rooms. The other major use of energy accounts for water heating which uses 32% of total energy. Next, the other appliances such as toasters, gas and stoves used in kitchens uses up 15 percent of energy. Surprisingly refrigerators consumes only little of 7 percent. The lighting and cooling appliances uses up total of 6 percent of energy.
Although, almost half the energy is consumed for heating, the greenhouse gases emission caused by heating is only 15 percent of total emission in the environment. On the contrary, other appliances causes 28 percent of emission. While, its not absolutely shocking to see 32 percent of CO2 emission is caused due to water heating appliances such as geysers.
Though, refrigerators consumes a little energy, the emissions caused due it accounts for twice the amount of energy used by it. Cooling appliances such as air conditioner or fans and electricity used for lighting bulbs accounts only for 3 and 8 percent respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, as to, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83006347266 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3522281561 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233953500267 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110899970659 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923892543537 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170612472806 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107738791225 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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