Nowadays, every other parents feel their children shouldbecome a doctor or an engineer leading to pressurizing them to be excellent academically. This esaay will discuss the reasons and lastly it will givie opinions for the same.
Parents often stereotype certain professions such as doctors, engineer, administrators and so as successful and noble careers. Hence they expect their childrens to choose such careers instead of asking to choose their interested area of study. Some childrens are rather excellent in arts, dancing or in sports. But due to parental pressure they are required to accept what their parents wish them to be.
Also, due to increased competitiveness amongst people around us parents pressurize them tend to forget their children's capabilities and interests. Furthermore, relatives and friends often compare one's success with other childrens and force their children to excel like other people.
This causes a negative impact on the childrens such as depression and stress. They are continuously poached by parents to excel academically at a young age which causes to detach themselves from people around them. They feel insecure to even voice their opinions. Childrens become anxious to even take a minor decision in life. Researches in universities state that children do not perform well under stress or anxiety in exams as compared to when they are more relaxed and calm. Sometimes children's who cannot cope with the pressure and stress tend to be suicidal. According to the yearly statistics in America and United Kingdom more than quarter students quit their life due to immense academic pressure.
Hence, it is best if childrens are not burduned by parents to choose what career they like instead they should be allowed to study what interests them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and so as successful and noble careers. Hence they expect their childrens to choose s...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...re, relatives and friends often compare ones success with other childrens and force ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'detaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: detaching
...cademically at a young age which causes to detach themselves from people around them. The...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...immense academic pressure. Hence, it is best if childrens are not burduned by parent...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33568904594 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75048790819 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6346444149 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322235290458 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104655642173 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592625723411 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18760731332 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406597464044 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and so as successful and noble careers. Hence they expect their childrens to choose s...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...re, relatives and friends often compare ones success with other childrens and force ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'detaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: detaching
...cademically at a young age which causes to detach themselves from people around them. The...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...immense academic pressure. Hence, it is best if childrens are not burduned by parent...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33568904594 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75048790819 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6346444149 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322235290458 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104655642173 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592625723411 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18760731332 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406597464044 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.