The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The charts give information about on the percentage of energy exploitation and carbon gas emission, resulting from this in Australian households. Overall, the household separated into 5 categories. While the volume of releasing carbon dioxide decreased in heating, other features saw a rise in this.
The most power utilised by heating and water heating, 42 percent and 30 percent, respectively; however, coming to emission, heating plunged considerable, while water heating increased by a tiny fraction, becoming one of the third percent of the whole emission. Meanwhile, other appliances consumed 15 percent of energy consumption, releasing 28 percent of greenhouse gases.
In contrast, cooling and lighting had lowest fractions 3 percent and 8 percent, respectively. At that time their emission volume doubled. According to refrigeration, its emission was 2 times more than usage 14 percent to 7 percent.
In summary, according to chart it is clear that Australian household’s greenhouse gas emission was roughly two times more than consumption. However, heating was exception in this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...ses. In contrast, cooling and lighting had lowest fractions 3 percent and 8 percent, resp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, third, while, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70303030303 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17500569401 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.8486647347 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150417483391 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682582313346 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805636934543 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106342404295 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818872349911 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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