The given pie charts delineate energy consumption used in an average Australian household, as well as their effects on greenhouse gas emissions.
Overall, it is clearly seen that heating forms the main energy consumption whereas water heating has the highest ratio of greenhouse gases.
According to the first graph, the largest proportion of energy is used for heating, which has small minority of greenhouse emissions, with 42% . In addition to that, water heating accounts for less than a third of total energy consumption while it is responsible for the highest amount of harmful emissions. Besides, even if other appliances comprise of 15% of the consumption of energy, it takes second main part of the greenhouse gas emissions.
In contrast, cooling and lighting tasks which totally represent 6% of the using energy cause lower effect than the rest of tasks through 3% and 8% respectively. Ultimately, refrigeration accounts for 7% and this figure has 14% of the total greenhouse effects.
- the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 78
- The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Write a report for a university lecturer the process below 81
- The table shows the percentage of very good rated by first year students 88
- All children should study a foreign language, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement ? 73
- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nority of greenhouse emissions, with 42% . In addition to that, water heating acco...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...ions. Besides, even if other appliances comprise of 15% of the consumption of energy, it ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, third, well, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30817610063 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88487434735 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.5719499409 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 5.23603664747 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282791231517 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131799545878 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105377836047 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180744795038 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110552624665 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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