The first chart below shows household energy consumption in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse-gas gas emissions which stem from energy usage.
Australian household energy consumption separates into six elements. Those are shown by different percentage. Heating takes the lion's share with a hefty 42% but greenhouse gas emission related to that shows a minor rate with 15%.
It can be seen from the charts that cooling has taken the minimum percentage both energy use and gas emission by 2 and 3 respectively. Refrigeration and lighting's consumption under the ten per cent. Refrigeration consumption almost twice than the lighting. When we take consider the two elements which i mention previous sentence, their gas emissions doubled the consumptions.
Water heating consumption has the second percentage rate after heating consumption with 30% but it is responsible the most gas emission. While other appliances consumption is not striking as the others but emission rate is granted for 28%.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...we take consider the two elements which i mention previous sentence, their gas em...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'appliances'' or 'appliance's'?
Suggestion: appliances'; appliance's
...ible the most gas emission. While other appliances consumption is not striking as the othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49056603774 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02754256826 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1188072601 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417221806497 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1549811969 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184292547713 0.0843802449381 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279804414687 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252021657091 0.0819641961636 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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