The pie charts illustrate the sources of energy consumption in an average house in Australia and the emissions of the greenhouse gases, which result from the aforementioned usages.
Overall, it is clear that whereas heating and water heating consume the highest amount of energy, cooling and lighting are the most energy-efficient. Furthermore, water heating emits the highest amount of CO2, while cooling does so the least.
Looking at the energy uses, heating appliances make up 42% of the total output, and water heating accounts for less than a third. The lowest amount of energy is absorbed by refrigeration, lighting and cooling, with 7%, 4% and 2% respectively.
Turning to the sources of greenhouse gasses, water heating’s percentage is nearly twice as high as heating’s, with the former being at 32% and the latter at 15%. Cooling, at 3%, and lighting, at 8%, are the least responsible for the carbon footprint. Refrigeration makes up roughly the same proportion as heating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35443037975 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18305983177 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1814688341 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119829968901 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568360861213 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824242677786 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955031663773 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101515372829 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.