There is no doubt that community services have an important role in our society. However, while some people argue that this activity should be unpaid and a mandatory part of high school curriculum, I would completely disagree with this point of view.
First of all, in my opinion, community services should not be unpaid. This is because if one performs a job, they deserve to receive a monetary compensation. Although it is understandable that some people are ready to work for free, as they get positive emotions from helping people, it is not true for everybody. Moreover, by being paid, children may learn to value their work more, which may lead to improving their self-esteem. In contrast, if teenagers were not paid, some of them would feel undervalued, as unwanted and unpaid labor may be considered by some to be a form of slavery.
Secondly, I disagree that this work should be compulsory. The main purpose of community service tasks is to teach children to respect others and to appreciate the world around them. However, when this work becomes obligatory, teens may not learn these lessons, as for them it may become a burden and not a pleasure. Let us take physical education as an example. Many adults do not like it just because in their school years they were obliged to attend boring lessons, even though physical activity has many benefits, both for the body and for the mind.
In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that unpaid community service should be compulsory for high school students, as this job should be paid and voluntary.
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000 87
- Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures 79
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar 55
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports for younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89219330855 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64935034055 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5929115669 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363346255029 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119120223748 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785296271888 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231702493989 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387242537491 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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