The first chart below shows how energy is used in an Average Australian household. The second charts shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from thia energy use.
Summarise the infor.ation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make conparisions where relevant.
The first pie charts compares the percentages of energy use for Australian household. The second graph illustrates the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions from energy is used by Australian household.
Overall, the heating use energy at Australian household which is the biggest use of energy. Meanwhile, water heating is the biggest rate which produce greenhouse gases.
The first pie charts, 42 percent spend for heating and heating has the highest percentages in this chart. The second percentages of water heating accounted by 30 percent followed by other appliances use energy is at around 15% in Australian. Cooling, lighting and refrigeration are the small relative, at around 2%, 4% and 7%, respectively.
The second chart, the main sources cause the emissions gas from using energy at 32% occupy by water heating and had the biggest rate compared with others at Australian household. Next, the other appliances account by 28 percent. Meanwhile, refrigeration is at around 14 percent. Although heating is the biggest use of energy, it is not main factor which cause the greenhouse gases. The lowest proportion of cooling and lighting are at around 3% and 8%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33155080214 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9835834393 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475935828877 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0008169836 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299946905964 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133025508009 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127747113073 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239177938419 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118095862255 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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