The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the green house gas emissions which result from this energy use .Summarise the information and make comparison.
The first pie chart illustrates the use of energy in an average family in Australia, and the second one compares the percentage of greenhouse gas emitted by this energy consumption.
It is noticeable from the charts that the energy utilised for heating makes up the largest proportion. Addtionally, water heating results in most of geenhouse gas emissions.
In terms of Australian household energy consumption, the rate of energy used for heating is highest, at 42% of total energy use, while the figure for water heating is slightly lower, at 30%. By contrast, only 2% and 4% of energy are consumed for cooling and lighting respectively.
When it comes to Australian household greenhouse gas emissions, 32% of total greenhouse gas is sent out by water heating, whereas gas emissions resulting from cooling account for the smallest proportion, at only 3%. Other appliances are responsible for emitting 28 % of greenhouse gas. At the same time, the figure for lighting is sharply lower, at 8% of greenhouse gas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1696969697 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93620167937 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7956864559 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287412988467 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128847680719 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100225232602 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200541683347 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865879516709 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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