The first chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross-section of 100000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart below shows their destinations over the same period
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The given table illustrates the purposes of British inhabitant goes oversea between 1994 to 1998 and their destination.
As is revealed from the first table, overall, it is obvious that the main purpose of travelling abroad among UK residents was for relaxation, meanwhile, the number of British people going overseas for unspecific reasons was the lowest. It is also clear from the second table that Western Europe was the most favourable destination among the three surveyed areas.
To be more specific, in 1994, there were more than fifty thousand English travellings abroad for holiday, approximately five-fold higher than the number of people going for business in the same year. This figure decreased slightly by 1 000 people after one year before experiencing a gradual increase to over 20 000 during the next three years. Similarly, one in ten surveyed people responded that visiting friends and relatives was the main purpose of their overseas travelling in the first year. This number inconsiderably decreased by 60 people in 1995 and then witnessed growth to more than 3 000 people in the last year. Besides, residents travelling to a foreign country for work in the UK rose steadily/ moderately by nearly 1 000 people while the figure for those going for unspecific reasons almost remained unchanged/ stable throughout the time frame, at around 1 000 travellers.
Turning to the second table, standing at 19 000 people in 1994, the number of visitors to Western Europe showed a significant decline to 18 944 people one year later before increasing again to nearly 25 000 people till the last year. Following the same trend, the number of British travellers to other areas dropped from 1 782 in 1994 to 1 752 in 1995 and finally experiencing a growth of 700 people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 296.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01351351351 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70259290318 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6753459978 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.4 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181430685892 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774422676545 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316274422875 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105338005617 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370238560957 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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