The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The tables compare 100000 of people reasons for traveling abroad and locations they visited between the years 1994 and 1998.
Overall, more than half of UK residents travel for holiday and leisure purposes. In the interim, majority of them prefer Western Europe as a favorite destination, while North America was the least preferred as survey showed. However, the number of people traveling abroad is generally on the rise.
Regarding the first table, the number of individuals that vacate for leisure purposes were tremendously increased around 5000 individuals in four years. Nevertheless, going away for a business or paying friends and family a visit were much less popular over the time period despite the steady rise of numbers of individuals which were 3155 and 2689 in 1994 and reached 3957 and 3181 in 1998 respectively. While traveling for other reasons fluctuated around 1000 over the same time period.
According to the second table, the number of travelers preferred Western Europe were on the rise. With similar trend that can be seen in other destination but less in number. Nonetheless, the estimated growth in number of individuals vacate to Western Europe was more than 5000 compared to merely about 1000 individuals went North America. While traveling for other areas slightly increased from 1782 in 1994 to 2486 in 1998.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23041474654 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59210752622 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576036866359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8954766417 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198867192811 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863171910271 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628824579888 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133716157288 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416722063294 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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