In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
Today, there are burgeoning in the numbers of people owning a private car. This results in an overwhelming traffic. This essay will discuss the reasons of this and look at some feasible solutions.
It is indisputably true that using the private car is the most convenient method of conveyance. However, this is one of the main causes of overwhelming streets. People vastly replaced the public transportation with utilizing their own cars in their daily routines, which put an unprecedented pressure on the city's roads, especially in peak hours. Another reason to be mentioned is the fast increment of urbanization phenomenon that lead to load the cities more than their capacity, which in turn majorly pressured the city's infrastructure as a whole. In other words, a city that is designed to inhabit a maximum of 2 million individuals, but after a period of time it's population soared into 5 million dwellers this will enormously pressured the city. This is a precise explanation of the main cause that have led to this intricate problem.
There are several methods that should be used to solve this current issue. Firstly, government should limit the number of cars allowed to be owned by a single car for each family. This in turn encourage all family members to share the same vehicle going work and back or even utilizing the public transportation. Secondly, routine maintenance of main roads in addition to building bridges and tunnels in order to decrease the number of cross roads which will tremendously lessen the traffic. Finally, put a certain regulations on companies and institutes to provide their employees a free or even a discounted mean of conveyance that obviate their need to use a private car to reach their workplaces.
To conclude, the cooperation of individuals and companies with government in a community is fundamental and can make all solutions come true. This is eventually done in order to relieve the overwhelming pressure on the streets, which in turn salvage people from traffic stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'overwhelming traffic'.
Suggestion: overwhelming traffic
...e owning a private car. This results in an overwhelming traffic. This essay will discuss the reasons of...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...m of 2 million individuals, but after a period of time its population soared into 5 million dw...
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Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'pressure'
Suggestion: pressure
...5 million dwellers this will enormously pressured the city. This is a precise explanation...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'regulation'?
Suggestion: regulation
...sen the traffic. Finally, put a certain regulations on companies and institutes to provide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09309309309 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93468228397 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7906459689 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214902354181 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778231412733 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693523823843 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133415374219 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362273137852 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.