the first chart shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse ga emissions which result from this energy use
The pie charts illustrate the amount of energy which are used for several purposes (heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliences) in a common household in Australia and how much gas emissions which are resulted from these applications. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the energy for heating has the biggest proportion and the highest gas emission is produced from water heating purpose.
The majority of energy is used for heating, account for 42% and followed by water heater at 30%. However, energy need for cooling, lighting and refrigeration has small percentage, only 2%, 4% and 7% respectively. 15% of energy is seen for other apliances.
Nevertheless, the proportion data for gas emission is not directly proportional with the use of energy. water heater contribute the largest percentage in production of gas emissions, at just over 30%. Although the use of energy for heating experience the highest proportion, gas emission from this activity is observeb only 15%. The smaller proportion in gas emission production in recorded in lighting at 8% and cooling at 3%. The amount of gas emissions which is produced from other aplliances is 28%.
- In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 61
- the first chart shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse ga emissions which result from this energy use 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Water
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, nevertheless
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34020618557 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95373418706 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0599919119 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232500478821 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926291713019 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768505625948 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171519206558 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542263948904 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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