In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
These days, many schools face several problems related to student action. In order to tackle this problems, we have to know what the causes are. This essay will discuss the causes for this and suggest some possible solutions to tackle it.
The first cause is students use technology unwisely especially Internet. These days, the Internet become more and more popular among the people in many countries. Therefore, most students from elementary school to university have smartphone to access the Internet. However, beside having a good side, Internet contains variety contents from good things to bad things which can be copied by student. As a result, there is big possibility that students who are not yet mature will copy what they get from Internet such as bullying or fighting. Another factor is decreasing support from their parents. This may be because of the fact that many parents in cities now both have to work so they just have limited time to give support or advise for their children.
However, there are ways to tackle such problem. Firstly, one of the ways to combat those problems is to control the use of Internet by schools or their parents. For example, students who are under 17 years old forbidden to carry their smarphone to the school. In addition, their parents also have important role to control children behavior by doing as role model and giving affection for their children so the children will get enough support and do not need get attention from other people.
To sum up, several factors can cause problems in student behaviour , but there are many methods to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35738121071 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3705729398 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29415940291 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101030766109 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704663535963 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212981279318 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872306574353 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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