The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flow chart shows the after-effects of deforestation.
Overall, it is clear that cutting down the forests eventually reverts with varied consequences. It has four major issues faced immediately post jungle clearance.
The first impact is, while removing trees and saplings from the soil the department uses heavy machinery, due to which the soil becomes hards and baked as it gets compressed heavily. Thus, rainwater flows over this land thereby increasing the chance of a flood.
The second impact is, topsoil also erodes, and the farming on such soil becomes far more difficult losing its quality.
Furthermore, the third issue arises is the risk of wildfires increases whether it be deliberately or accidentally, the woods of these trees get destroyed, and also the micro-organism feeding on it gets reduced effectively. These ultimately lead to the degradation of vegetation.
The last problem is, in return, the plants start exhibiting less moisture to the air which loses its precipitation and increases the dryness and drought on the barren land
- People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic 61
- You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall You have been told however that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall Write a letter to the manager In the letter describe what 73
- Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 11
- In many countries small shops and town centers are going out of business because people tend to drive to the large out of town stores This results in an increase in car use and it also means that people without cars have limited access to out of town stor 73
- Overpopulation is the world s most serious environmental problem To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4371257485 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97355888156 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.1449869393 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0376479833356 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215084241297 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457390879826 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283169457192 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521903214883 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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