The flowchart below shows the process involved in completing the work experience requirement for university students.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flowchart presents the steps required to complete the requirements for work experience of the university students. As is presented in the flowchart, there are six steps involved in fulfilling the requirements starting from the Application submission till submitting the final report and after a student successfully complete these steps, he would be awarded the necessary credits.
As is presented in the flowchart, the first step of the process is called ‘Application’ that requires a student to choose a suitable and potential workplaces and to arrange the interview to submit the application in the fields he is interested in. The next step involves the approval stage where a student needs to be accepted and then he needs to submit the acceptance letter to a professor for approval. After that, the student is required to make a schedule to work for more than 10 hours per week for more than 20 weeks. In the fourth stage, the candidate has to fulfil the weekly work report and submit to the corresponding professor each Friday. In the Evaluation step, the candidate will participate in the evaluation meeting in the final week of his work with the work supervisor and the supervisor would submit the evaluation form. In the final step, known as ‘Final Report’, the candidate has to submit the final report before the last week of spring semester. And with the submission of final report, the work experience requirements are fulfilled according to the process described in the flowchart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 853, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...visor would submit the evaluation form. In the final step, known as 'Final Re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17338709677 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13413856294 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4119790513 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.555555556 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24688530757 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126021456005 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100947262182 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224915416472 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425595723942 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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