The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

The provided flow diagram describes the process involved in the manufacturing of plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Overall, it is evident from the layout that this process consists of five important stages such as; moulding molten plastic, quality control for strength, sorting, quality control for colour and dispatching.

Firstly, the molten plastic is poured in three different types of moulds to get the desired colour of clips; that is, red, blue and yellow. After that, the clips undergo quality control check for strength, where weak clips are rejected and strong clips moves to next stage, where they are sorted by hand at the next stage.

At the stage of sorting, mix coloured and single coloured clips are separated by hand. Further, at the next stage quality control checks mixed and single coloured clips, and finally they are packed and dispatched for sale.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15972222222 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30964120924 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9583116093 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226197854415 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131033614371 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940279431249 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159769765946 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096419271631 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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