Nowdays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of thrwaway society outweigh any possible economic advatages?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to throwing away old things and adapting new things. Mordern culture is a consumerist one, it is also known as disposable culture or use and throw culture. It is true that people have a tendency to discard their old and damaged possesion these days when they own something new.
On one side of arguement there are people who argue that the benefits considerably outweighs its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that abandoning used items and consuming new items demand for more increase use of machinery creating more pollution and waste electricity gas etcetera. Example for the production of new products advanced machinery is needed which not only creates pollution but is also major cause of deforestation and destruction of natural resourses. A recent research states that canada and U.S.A. contains only 52 percent of the world population till yet are accountable for 31.5 percent of consumption . While South Asia which had 22.4 percent of population is responsiblefor only 2 percent of consumption.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infact by adapting new things society moves forward and can invent products that will help in many ways example; now days cars are manufactured with air sacs which help them to save their life, advancement in biotechnology also helped to cure many diseases.
As we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance however, i tend to believe selective measure such as "3R's" that is ( reuse, recycle, reduce) should be used. The possibilities are endless a person just have to take the initiative and make the change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09187279152 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86363305383 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639575971731 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1093625419 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169003447403 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557663202705 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774341736318 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959480965767 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814723566169 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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