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The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of total travellers who used different types of transportation in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
It is evident from the chart that, the majority has travelled on foot at just under 35%, whereas travellers used bikes as their transport which is accounted for 25% in 1960. But much less in cars at approximately 5%. This pattern is reversed for the mode of buses which the highest amount of travellers in 1980, while other three transport modes were quite simillar at stood over 15% travellers.
In the year 2000. the mot popular transportation ...
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for the mode of buses which the highest amount of travellers in 1980
for the mode of buses which is the highest amount of travellers in 1980
Sentence: This pattern is reversed for the mode of buses which the highest amount of travellers in 1980, while other three transport modes were quite simillar at stood over 15 travellers.
Error: simillar Suggestion: similar
Sentence: In the year 2000. the mot popular transportation was car among European people which was at approximately 35.
Error: mot Suggestion: No alternate word
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