The following chart and pieces chart shows the sales of a company in first and second quarter of year
The provided horizontal representation, and pieces chart demonstrate sales by company during first, and second quarter of year. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is crystal clear that except toys the sales of all other products decreased in second quarter of year.
As far as trend is observed in bar graph, in first quarter company sold less than a fifth of electrical objects whereas sales of toys was just 5%. either of clothes or food sellings had been similar and were a quarter. The computer sales were one tenth, and other products were being sold by 20%.
Apart from that, it was worth noticing that the other products which were sold by company during second quarter of year were quarter While , electricals was 5%. moreover, the sales of food, and toys were 20 , and 30% respectively. It is lucid that sales figures of both computers, and clothes had been equal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Either
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Suggestion:
...mpany during second quarter of year were quarter While , electricals was 5%. more...
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Suggestion: ,
...cond quarter of year were quarter While , electricals was 5%. moreover, the sales...
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: ,
...ver, the sales of food, and toys were 20 , and 30% respectively. It is lucid that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91139240506 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57921378525 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2803282273 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325416651113 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136666151743 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157909862338 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223853631206 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110796983943 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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