Some business now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices some government has banned smoking in all public places do you agree or disagree?
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. he has progressed from walking barefooted in jungles to take first step on moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. for instance, the given topic asserts that are companies, and governments have banned smoking or not? through thiso essay I shall explore all the dimensions of the topic through examples and assertion and shape up my opinion at end of the essay.
first and foremost, smoking cigarette nowadays is an alarming issue responsible for taking several lives. it has numerous ill effects on health such as failure of lungs due to smake. moreover, smoking also results in cough, and blockage of trachea. Therefore, government of every nati on has implemented laws and penalties for those who smoke in public places where it affects other public. nonetheless, still it is not givend up by its addicters. the quintessence of this is, by university of delhi about survey has been conducted in three regions:utter prakash, India, and bihar where workers and some pauper are still smoking in bus stops, shopping streets and outside the cinemas also.
The another fact is that not only poor and slammed people are habitual to this but also some educted; and working individualso. so such employees are creating bad atmosphere for their organisation and for coworkers. as a consequence, companies have said no to smoking because it is injurious to health, and also making bad impact on company. moreover, such people cannot concentrate on work. the another reason for banning cigarette in working areas is smoke can also be responsible for blunders of fire for cigarette come in contact with any lighting or electronic material
thus, it can be ascertained that it is a problematic concern. However, I believe that due to the harmful effects of smoking both; executive bodies, and employers of every foundation should make some rules and also impose heavy penalties on such masses who do this punishable act after knowing about its prohibition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84619343739 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616519174041 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2920456046 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23813415732 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617854307636 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525786355596 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131022932432 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299544183085 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.