Young people in disturbed economies are becoming violent and affecting the life and property. What are reasons , impacts and remedies for this
It is undoubtedly the reason that is distributed economies are reason that young people are causing harmeet to their lives or not? it is affecting the society adversely. In this essay iwill examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some effective measures that authorities could implement to mend this trend.
The first step is to understand why young people are becoming violent and harming their life and property? There is a chain of reasoning behind this. First and foremost, in the present scenario, mostly the qualified people are out of work because of lack of employment opportunities. The best quintessence of this fact is india where70% of population is unemployed. hence, individual get frustrated and their behaviour turn to aggressive. another key reason is inflation which is controversial point because in disturbing economies people find it difficult to manage their expenses.
This phenomenon has plethora of detrimental effects on society. one of the results of this is when a person is out of money, and are not able to provide their families. consequently, their relationship with family members get weakened due to arisen of conflicts. in addition to this, young generation due to unemployment commit offences which in turn make the society unsafe. As a epitome, it was surveyed by crime controlling team that most of the offenders who are caught are not having work.
However, there is no one solution to this problem after given the complexity of its causes. Although, one thing can be done to prevent this is authorities should take initiative steps to provide worwork to unemployed people by increasing the industries , and starting small scale business.moreover, another remedy for this problem is counselling should be done for those young brigades who are indulged in crime, and also harming their lives by taking support of drugs.
To elucidate, manifold answers are provided to this problem. However, I tend to believe that only executive bodies can take effective steps to change the condition of their economies , and to reduce unemployment which is root cause of this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92712822177 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4326137723 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301952347437 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867852408833 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706354732724 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162645282782 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856181676629 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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