The following graph and pie chart show the sales of a company in the first and second quarter of the year
The first given horizontal chart depicts the information about the amount of sales by a company during January, February, March. Another, circular layout reveals the information about the sales of a company during the other month April, may, June. The data is calibrated into per centum. It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall, it is evident that In first three months toys are maximum amount , and other months is minimum amount of data .
On one side, that in first step of clothes,and food are equally amounts of data . Moreover, they have constant data. On moving, In computer of two quarters is data ratio 10% same into each other. These have amount is 10%, 20%,10% respectively.
On other hand is data ratio of electrical into both quarter is 10%,5% . Moving a head, these are ratio of data is different from others. As well as, In all others things into both quarter is 20%,25%. Finally, all the amount is 10%,5%,25%,20% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring January, February, March. Another, circular layout reveals the information ...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rst three months toys are maximum amount , and other months is minimum amount of d...
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Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d other months is minimum amount of data . On one side, that in first step of clo...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... one side, that in first step of clothes,and food are equally amounts of data . More...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hes,and food are equally amounts of data . Moreover, they have constant data. On m...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
...io 10% same into each other. These have amount is 10%, 20%,10% respectively. On ot...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f electrical into both quarter is 10%,5% . Moving a head, these are ratio of data...
^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... both quarter is 10%,5% . Moving a head, these are ratio of data is different fro...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, moreover, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70331560118 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8673435755 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1538461538 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2307692308 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114209695496 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403519387259 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052830754561 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714283611648 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499346533028 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.