The following graph and pie chart shows the sales of a company in the first and second quarter of the year.
The given histogram and circular representation highlight the information about the sale of 6 products: others, toys, clothes, food, computers and electrical by company in the period of six months. The data is calibrated in per centum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that there is significant rise in the sale of toys in the second quarter of year, whereas sales of food is being dropped by 5 %.
It can be seen that, in the first quarter of year, sale of both clothes and food is 25%, but neither toys nor computers has crossed the sale of 10%. In addition to this, 15% of electrical product is being sold in the first quarter by the company. Moreover, sales of computers, toys and others are 10%, 5% and 20% respectively.
Moving further, peak number of toys and least number of electric is being sold by company in the second quarter of the year, which is 30% and 5% respectively. Apart from all this, sale of clothes have been dropped by 10% in comparison to first quarter of year, and 5% of electrical are being sold by the company in the second quarter. However, others has a sale of nearly a quarter in the second quarter of the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least numb'?
Suggestion: least numb
...Moving further, peak number of toys and least number of electric is being sold by company in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62559241706 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63013047769 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473933649289 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8874496016 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340260576629 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163234261637 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106312184003 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215661671421 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105589310547 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.