The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
With the rise in the modernization, there are increase in criminal activity by youngster all across the world. It is undoubtedly the case that do educating parents the good parenting skills help to drop the crime rate by the youngsters?. I totally agree with the statement become parenting is important for children. Through this essay, I shall explore the topic in upcoming paragraph.
Beyond doubt, parenting plays a significant role in person life. If parents are being educated by the good parenting skills it help to drop the crime rate as parents always take care of their children and teach them good moral skills. Moreover, parents always motivate their children to do constructive things for society rater than spending your time in other activities. For instance, the recent survey conducted by times of India among two group of people one has good parenting skills and others do not have asserts that the children who faced good parenting by their parents are less involved in non official activity.
Moving further, if children have faced a good parenting by his parents then children do not dare to participate in criminal activity as children already know the consequence of participation as it is not good for his career. In addition to this, parents always guide their children to do good work.
To conclude, there is no doubt that parenting plays a crucial role in the upbringing of the children and if parents are taught good parenting skills then I will be a effective way to drop crime by youngster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97265625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68356532008 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.802898973 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383120553941 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172075993539 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101311424822 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259165521887 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461185861979 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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