further education in the UK
The graph illustrate the populations of men and women in further education in the UK during three interval of time from 1970 to 1990
overall, it's obvious from the graph that part-time education is higher than full-time study
during 1970 men number in further education has reached one million on the other hand women in the same year number is almost 800 thousand
and according to the graph full-time education for both men and women not as high as part-time for men the number is almost 150 thousand
and women is only 10 thousand however during 1980 to 1981 in one year men were studying part-time education are slightly decreased from one million to 850 thousand but for women the number in increased more than 1970 which is 800 thousand and in fall time education
women are get more and higher rates than men in 1990 to 19991 men number of part-time education raised just a little bit higher more than the previous to be 870 thousand for women the number is raise up to more than one million also in full time education women became
also in full time women became more interested in further education so, eventually according to the graph it's clear to notice that women number in further education are rise up during the three period of time but men number dramatically dropped down from one million to 900 thousand besides full time education for women are also getting slightly higher
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The graph illustrate the populations of men and women in fur...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'interval' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'intervals'.
Suggestion: intervals
...urther education in the UK during three interval of time from 1970 to 1990 overall, it...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...education is higher than full-time study during 1970 men number in further educat...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... same year number is almost 800 thousand and according to the graph full-time edu...
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Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or men the number is almost 150 thousand and women is only 10 thousand however du...
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Line 11, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 800 thousand and in fall time education women are get more and higher rates than...
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Line 15, column 111, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...er of part-time education raised just a little bit higher more than the previous to be 8...
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Line 15, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion raised just a little bit higher more than the previous to be 870 thousand fo...
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Line 15, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ised just a little bit higher more than the previous to be 870 thousand for wome...
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Line 15, column 239, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ise up to more than one million also in full time education women became also in ful...
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Line 19, column 9, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ime education women became also in full time women became more interested in further...
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Line 19, column 195, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... education are rise up during the three period of time but men number dramatically dropped dow...
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Line 19, column 292, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rom one million to 900 thousand besides full time education for women are also getting sl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78367346939 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31576456367 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387755102041 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 245.0 22.4926829268 1089% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1172.0 112.824112599 1039% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 245.0 22.9334400587 1068% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 50.0 5.23603664747 955% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225990204304 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225990204304 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14841941883 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921268045072 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 123.6 13.2329268293 934% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -168.74 61.2550243902 -275% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.7 10.3012195122 948% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.92 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.21 8.06136585366 213% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.4329268293 490% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 100.0 10.9970731707 909% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 124.0 11.0658536585 1121% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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