The graph illustrates the number of units produced and exported by a company from the year 2000 to 2007. Units are in crores.
Overall, the company has highest items manufactured and exported in the year 2007. On the other hand year 2000 was the least units manufactured and year 2002 was the least number of units exported. We can see that the company in the mid years experienced some up and downs. But finally at the end the graph goes high and can assume that company ended in profits.
In 2000 the company started manufacturing with 6 crores items, simultaneously with approximately 3 crores units exported in the same year. The year 2002 was the time where exporting has its worst hit with an exporting units of 2 crores, 7 crores is the amount of units produced in that year. The year 2007 is a happy year for the company because it is the year where the company has around 9 crores units produced and 6 crores units exported.
Year 2001 was just like a standard year where there is no increase or decrease in sold units. While coming to the years 2003 to 2006 there is a huge bumpy ride for the firm as we can see that the graph goes up and down. In the year 2005 the firm has low units of production (7 crores) and at the same time the year has high number of units exported (6 crores).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...are in crores. Overall, the company has highest items manufactured and exported in the ...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...high number of units exported 6 crores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34567901235 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33902746187 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432098765432 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3190912454 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175493942954 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958777497994 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767415790604 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161564012191 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947170752647 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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