The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries
There are a line graph and a table which are give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo. In line graph shows there are three ways of uses, which are agriculture, industrial, and domestic uses in period of 1900 to 2000.
Since 1900-2000 agriculture become the most water uses around 500 km3 in the beginning and more than 3000 km3 at the end of 2000. There an unique condition appeared along 1900-1950, water in industrial use and domestic use no more than 400km3, but in 1960-2000 industrial use increase more slightly than domestic use.
In table shows water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. Beside the water consumption, the table also compare their population and irrigated land. Brazil who has 176 million and 26,500 km2 irrigated land, their water consumption per person is 359 m3. Contrast Brazil, Democratic Republic of Congo who has 5.2 million population and 100 km2 irrigated land only need 8 m3 water consumption per person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'graphs'?
Suggestion: graphs
There are a line graph and a table which are give information ...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...than 3000 km3 at the end of 2000. There an unique condition appeared along 1900-19...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.342391304348 0.268076937826 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.0760869565217 0.116061578633 66% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070652173913 0.0759168565197 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0271739130435 0.0366838410393 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0108695652174 0.0131127313244 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135869565217 0.155750635184 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0163043478261 0.0379272487307 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.65136313505 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0054347826087 0.0210936926555 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0489130434783 0.0948980150116 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0217391304348 0.00967000014798 225% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1014.0 1161.00487805 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.9 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03571428571 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297619047619 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232142857143 0.247514529752 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196428571429 0.171178102325 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.112407865282 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65136313505 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 46.9126876129 49.3433353143 95% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3511629672 42.9750493124 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 135.714022679 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 44.2142857143 47.7609492067 93% => OK
Elegance: 4.33333333333 2.94281807926 147% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456975960537 0.418131533498 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.272113510826 0.181151798455 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.134307967695 0.0850326197045 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.684812865115 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106902501953 0.157042692854 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242927650058 0.228904883108 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136519976512 0.108899403657 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.22655074246 0.367819155151 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0565584610136 0.0812612215331 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31065430611 0.316326947829 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583743525958 0.0921553760075 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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