The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The pie chart compares the consumption of water around the world, and the table shows how much water was used in Brazil and the Congo.
It is clear from the line chart that water was used for agriculture the most in all of the years. Additionally, Brazillians consumed significantly more water than people in the Congo did.
In 1990, the amount of water used for agriculture was highest, at around 500 km3, while the figures for industrial and domestic uses stood at 100 km3. Over the next 100 years, there was a gradual increase in the amount of water consumed for agriculture to 3,000 km3, and the figure for industry and domesticity also rose to approximately 1,000 and 500 km3 respectively.
In 2000, 176 milliion people lived in Brazil, which was significantly higher than the population in the Congo. The amount of irrigated land in Brazil was 26,500 km2, compared to 100 km2 in the Congo. Finally, each person in Brazil used 359 m3 of water, while there were only 8 m3 consumped in the Congo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e amount of irrigated land in Brazil was 26,500 km2, compared to 100 km2 in the C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72159090909 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62767352047 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539772727273 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9687380816 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173745092578 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918611606703 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784647920161 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138091026603 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791876751811 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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