The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumptionin two different countries.
The chart describes about global water usage divided by sector over a period of 100 year, while the table gives comparison about water consumption between two different countries.
Overall, the consumption increased over the period with majority of water was used for agriculture. It is demonstrated clearly with the comparison with the case of Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo.
In 1900, the global consumption for agricultural was around 500 km3 and this number kept rising significantly to reach over 1500 in 1960. Meanwhile, industry and domestic usage remained at a relatively low level around 100 for a period of 60 years until started to increase in 1960. From 1960, agricultural consumption rose dramatically to nearly doubled up in 2000. Industry also witnessed a significant climb from 250 to peak at 1000 km3 while domestic use only increased gradually to around 300 by the end of 2000.
It is demonstrated with the case of Brazil which had the average consumption about 359 m3 per person on the total of 176 million, meanwhile the figure was tremendous lower with only 8 m3 in 2000. It is reasonable for 26,500 kilometre square irrigated land of Brazil compared with only 100 km2 belong to Congo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05445544554 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8484797487 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5916483476 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141358108446 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606598632701 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115446133084 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119749099981 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146313753137 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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