The graph and table below show average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in major cities. The table given informations four seasons the average of hours of sunshine in London, Sydney and New York cities.
In more detail, in January, sunshine in London and New York sun seems not as much, it is around 5 and 10 hours. Therefore in Sydney that number gous more than 25. Lines of London and New York cities are increased about 6 months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And other 5 months, New York with London changed ways and numbers with Sydney. During of the year London's line moves in the same way together with New York's. However line of Sydney is not been flexible with them all of the time.
The highest level in New York was shown in July, approximately 30⁰ degrees. New York's the lowest index is about 5⁰ degrees. The line graph shows the highest temperature of London in July and August. These months temperature is between 20⁰ and 25⁰. The highest level in Sydney was shown in January. This month temperature is between 25⁰ and 30⁰. The table shows that, New York hotter than Sydney and London cities.
Hours of sunshine shows for cities London 1.180, New York 2.535 and Sydney 2.473
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: period
...increased about 6 months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And oth...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...ure of London in July and August. These months temperature is between 20⁰ and 25⁰. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69333333333 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16008230296 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2701897307 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.1176470588 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285260297326 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108783389294 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193761503893 0.0843802449381 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244367969537 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232480365382 0.0819641961636 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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