The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Submitted by freak on Fri, 08/02/2019 - 07:28

Now the days we can see major effects of the global worming in our daily lives. Many major changes have been examined in this weather changes like<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="like "></span> the temperature or unexpected rainfalls. But here as per the data provide for the hours of the sunrise annually in major cities like New York, London and Sydney. The data also shows us their average temperature which has been calculated monthly thought-out the year.

Firstly talking about the annual hours of sunshine in these three major cities.
New York city has the record of 2,535 hours of sunrise annually which is the highest than others. Sydney stands at the second place with 2,473 hours of sunrise annually and London, which is at the bottom of the data with only 1,180 hours of sunrise annually.

Secondly taking a look on the chat it shows that average temperature rise gradually in to major cities together London and New York while Sydney shows the opposite of the two cities. New York having the least temperature of about 4 degrees in the first stage of the year gradually increasing to the peak of nearly 30 degrees in the mid of the year. Similarly with the London, at first stage of the year it starts from 8-9 degrees about and gaining the peak about nearly 24 degrees in the mid year and gradually decreasing in the other. The temperature in the Sydney was not similar to the others. The temperature was at its peak at the early stages of the year nearly 26 degrees and dropped to 15 degrees in the middle of the year and came back to the peck of the temperature.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 350, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...arly 30 degrees in the mid of the year. Similarly with the London, at first stage of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78853046595 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07692263223 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3311886748 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255477778319 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100892585006 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769646942941 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158662946045 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667365448868 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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