The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Here the plane shows the stages before renovation and after renovation of the AAA Accountancy’s main office. The main features in the office are fax and copier machines that are been daily used by the employees. Here another thing are the desks of the employees working over there.
Firstly as shown in the plan before the renovation shows that there were different rooms for different activities. As entered there is a front desk following to the passage of different rooms such as storeroom to the right and the accounts office to the left. Just next to the accounts office there is a processing office and next to that there is new customers office. The office next to the storeroom is the payroll office. Further leading to the end of the corridor is meeting room and on the remaining corners are for lunch room on the left of it and manager’s office on the right.
Secondly after the renovation in the office shows that there are many changes made and my partitions are been removed. Such as now entering in the office is the front desk with two sitting areas on ether side of the desk. And as entered there is a hall including the desks for the employs and the fax and copier machines. Here a lounge is also been included right in front of manager’s office. But the things that were remain unchanged were the lunchroom, meeting room and the manager’s office.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accounts'' or 'account's'?
Suggestion: accounts'; account's
... such as storeroom to the right and the accounts office to the left. Just next to the ac...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accounts'' or 'account's'?
Suggestion: accounts'; account's
...ts office to the left. Just next to the accounts office there is a processing office and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are new customers'?
Suggestion: there are new customers
...is a processing office and next to that there is new customers office. The office next to the storeroo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...ng office and next to that there is new customers office. The office next to the storeroo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...to the storeroom is the payroll office. Further leading to the end of the corridor is m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...apos;s office. But the things that were remain unchanged were the lunchroom, meeting r...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, another thing, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73251028807 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64174453821 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432098765432 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7642228598 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4615384615 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147221000924 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059281418556 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074414284754 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119831443194 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687175246333 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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