The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
The line graph and table gives information about usual monthly temperatures and typical number of daytime per year in three large cities.
Overall, it can be said that at the end of the year the results were the same as in January.
The first obvious and general finding is that the annual hours of sunshine in New York had the highest increased in table(2,535) hours, but Sydney had the lawest point, whereas the data(2,473), and the information of hours about for London had (1,180) hours.
Although Sydney was at the top of the chart in 26 degrees, but in July his result was decreased to 16 degrees and in December it gained height again to 25 degrees.
Also other two cities had high results as London 23 degrees and New York 30 in July, but moving into December their results simultaneously low to 10 and 5 degrees.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ery good that medicine develops it very help us to fight with different diseases, we...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, still, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62781954887 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38336673526 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.134359091 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.777777778 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0622227227511 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416968314486 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559343096347 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633097623142 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056411957511 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ery good that medicine develops it very help us to fight with different diseases, we...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, still, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62781954887 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38336673526 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.134359091 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.777777778 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0622227227511 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416968314486 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559343096347 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633097623142 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056411957511 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.